Sergey II

The focus of this photo is well done, the blurred train way in the background is a nice mend of the industrial colours you may have been seeking. The pose of the model is very well done; it is emotional and calm but very strong at the same time with his facial expression. Though I do not know what concept you were trying to achieve, the shirt to me seems out of place. Possible if it was against a plain blue wall or something colourful, it may have gone more with the area you were working in, but it seems just a bit off to me.

The photo itself is well composed the off center of the piece adding more of the sense of wind that's taking back his shirt, the down sloping angle of the train adding to the direction of the photo to make the model more of the main piece.

Nicely done otherwise, good shot.